To comment on the comments…

Hello my lovelies.

Thank you for being so active on your class blogs. The discussions are great to see!

It has been brought to my attention that some people feel like the comments are a bit “harsh”.

I have now read through almost all of the comments, and I appreciate the connections you are making to each others’ posts, world events, other literature, and life in general. It’s great to read your opinions! I truly enjoy it.

This is probably one of the first times you’ve had to “publish” formal writing in a public forum, so remember it can be scary for some of your peers. Be careful that you do not attack others' views in a negative way. It’s great to have differing opinions, that’s what makes our world interesting! But present a different opinion in a way that invites discussion, rather than silencing people.

Some language that may help you to comment more positively –

“I understand what you are saying, but have you thought of this?”
“Good points, but I disagree with some things you’ve said”
“Your post got me thinking… what about this?”

On the other hand, if your post is commented on, feel privileged. You have started an intellectual discussion! If someone disagrees with what you have said, stand up for what you believe in, and keep arguing your own points! This will help you make your points clear, focused and well argued. Take the time to reflect on what is being said – you may want to edit your post after you hear from your peers. I do not mark them until the due date, so you have time to go back and make sure your thoughts are in order.

Keep commenting! It’s great.